I tried putting more detail into Nilje’s tusks.
I probably should have done this yesterday. Blame Tekken 7.
Good thing low gravity means you fall slower, or that landing could have been a lot worse.
So I figured when writing this that I’d want some low-gravity scenes. At first I was going to have it be on an asteroid about the size of Ceres. Then I looked it up and found out that the escape velocity there is less than a normal human walking speed. So I upped it to just over Pluto-sized, and that’s were the “you can’t jump into orbit” line comes from.
This is the first joke I’ve rewritten from the script. It was originally Wanda gushing over how cute Trudel is, and Saye gloating. I didn’t care for that one so much, but then I was looking up the dates for Kay’s abduction in the Gregorian and Darian calendars, and noticed that they just happend to line up like this.
If you’re curious, the converter I use is here.
And we’re halfway through chapter 1! Thoughts so far?