I went a bit heavier on the steam and bruising. I actually had to wait for the system to render out the big, dense particle brush I was using.
I ended up switching the dialogue around in the last two panels. I’d say it still works.
Stilldown – Theater Of The Bloody Tongue | Matt Burns – Skorgul Tales | Joseph O. Possum – Jack Legend | utzsar – Rocks | Inky – Ink Dolls | Amy Letts – Epic Fail | Sheryl Schopfer – Deer Me | Lou Graziani – Cy-Boar | Barry Linck – Phineus | Barry Linck – Phineus: Teen Wizard | Barry Linck – Phineus: Magician for Hire | hpkomic – RGBots | hpkomic – Cosmic Dash | Julie Devin – Monster Soup | J.E. Draft – The Challenges of Zona | Jaycee Knight – Bloomin’ Faeries | Peter Anckorn – By The Book | Jeremy Begin – After the Dream | The Blood Teller – Alvery Nerveaux’s Secret Case Files | Microraptor – Cryptida | Lirvilas – Bleach Blonde Valkyries of the Fourth Reich | Ebenezer Splooge – SFW Hentai | Ebenezer Splooge – Nine Tails of Titsune | Ebenezer Splooge – Mammazon | rulerbrain – Selling Smiles | Caley Tibbittz Collopy – SwordCat Knights | Andrew Hunter – Delve | Mark Egan – Bata Neart | Mark Egan – Back Office | Alli Perry – My Hero! | jeromatic – Planet Squad | jeromatic – Bunny Wiggins | Arne Cooper – The Androssian Prophecy | Marshall Reeves – Yesterday Bound | Sean Harrington – Spying With Lana | John Harrington – The Savage Sword of Sharona | Dizzaster Juice – WhiteOut | Dizzaster Juice – Offworld: The Crease | Zach Vanzile – West Tree Academy of Heroes | Ben Bourbon – Devilbear: The Grimoires of Bearalzebub | MonicaNG – MoonSlayer | yellowgerbil – Zoe the Vampire | Nick Greaves – The Great Isle of Prentil | Jacob Jones – Ayuri | Scott T. Hicken – Exiern: Dark Reflections | Scott T. Hicken – Exiern | Stef Marcinkowski – Sarah Zero
I just felt like parodying that picture that’s been going around the Internet.
And the original, if you haven’t seen it yet: