Nilje (pronounced nill-yeh) Voenyr (venn-ear, but with your lips rounded on the e) is the ship’s mechanic, who handles both hardware and software issues when they arise.
I tried for some more sexual dimorphism for Nilje’s mother than I have in the Noma natives.
Don’t worry, Kay’s waterproof.
Also, I legit don’t remember what that statement means. I have an explanation in the script notes, and I think someone translates it in a few strips.
C’mon, you didn’t think you would get out of this chapter without a gratuitous shower scene, did you?
I was going to say this was our first repeat planet, but we’ve been to Mars twice, haven’t we?
Phew, just barely made that one. Okay, I’m writing this just shy of a week before it posts, but the norm for me is a month early, and I just finished the script yesterday.
Every once in a while I decide I’ll put different elements on different layers. And then I regret it because of how much longer it takes.
This is the end of chapter 6. I’m honestly behind on my scripting, but I’ll try to have the next chapter at least ready enough for a cover by next week. I might be writing by the seat of my pants, though. (I usually go through three drafts of the entire chapter before the previous one ends.)