The Ayuri lands on Ennai, and they crew finally start doing what they set out for: making money.
Officer Hngarenë here is the third character I’ve named only because they’re wearing a nametag. Her name means “little star,” since we already have “Stella” here on Earth, and I’ve just been grabbing words I’ve already made up for Chendëk names (“shia” mean “gold,” “rin” means “river,” and “giezh” is a kind of fruit.)
I went a bit heavier on the steam and bruising. I actually had to wait for the system to render out the big, dense particle brush I was using.
I ended up switching the dialogue around in the last two panels. I’d say it still works.